Write a short story of less
than 600 words.
PEACE
©2004 by Mae Ondracek
It was such a beautiful moon-lit night that we decided to go for a
walk. Pete and I loved to walk and
outside was the best place for it. We
donned our jackets and off we went
It’s funny how different things look at night and when I saw some
flowers I said, “Those look just like our buttercups at home, don’t they,
Pete?”
He looked and laughed, “Yes, but they aren’t. Those are cocks combs.”
“Well, I didn’t know you knew flowers that good. When did you learn about them?” I asked.
Pete’s face was partly hidden in the
moon-light, but I could tell his face was red.
He said, “Oh, we had to learn about flowers in school and I guess I just
never forgot.”
I
put my arm through his and said, “Well, I’m glad you never forgot.”
We continued in silence until a deer
jumped across the road. We stood still,
hoping to see another one, but no more came.
“Do you want to go home, yet?” Pete asked.
“No, not with my big he-man beside me,” I
said.
So we continued on in silence. The moon was coming up higher in the sky and
it sure looked pretty. I remarked,
“Isn’t it funny how the moon looks so different when we are out here in it?”
“Yes, it sure does. I’ve only been out walking in the moon-light
once before. My car broke down about
five miles from home and I had to walk then.
I didn’t want to, but there was nothing else to do,” he said.
“I’m so glad you made it alright,
otherwise I would never have met you,” I cooed up at him.
“Well, I’m thinking it’s time we headed
back. We have gone quite a ways, don’t
you think?” he asked.
“Okay,” I said, as we turned around to
head back home. It wasn’t as pretty
going this way, but still the moon shone brightly. Why, it was almost like daylight, I
thought. I asked Pete, “How long do you
think we’ve been walking?”
Pete shrugged his shoulders and said,
“Gosh, I don’t know. Sure seems a long
time, though.”
Suddenly Pete stopped and said, “Listen.”
If we listened real well, we could hear
the church bell ringing. “Wow! Pete, we’ve been out here nearly two
hours. I guess we had better get home. It is getting a little chilly out here,
anyway,” I said.
So we hurried on our way and then Pete
said, “I see it. There’s home.”
I looked up and said, “It sure is. But it’s been so nice out here walking with
you, I don’t want it to ever end.”
When we were home at last Pete said, “Now,
for a cup of hot chocolate and then to bed.
How does that sound?”
Well, it sure sounded good to me and I
hurriedly put the kettle on while we hung up our coats. Pete said, “That sure was a beautiful walk
out there. We’ll have to do it again
sometime, Okay?” and he drew me near for a big kiss.
After kissing him, I heard the teakettle
making noise, so I pushed away, saying, “The rest can wait until later.”
We drank our hot chocolate and talked
until
I felt so peaceful that I just looked at
Pete and shook my head, yes. This was our best time, yet.