THE MOTEL CAPER

By Mae Ondracek

12/04/01

Startled, she sat up in bed. Her head was aching and her mouth was very dry. Even her legs ached, as if she had just walked five miles. The surroundings were very unfamiliar and she didn't remember how she had gotten there. It seems to be a -motel room, but where? In fact, right now she didn't even know her own name and she looked around for a purse but didn't see one.

As she swings her legs over the bedside, she recoils in terror. Her feet had touched something soft and cold. Hesitantly, she looked over the side of the bed and sees the lifeless form of a man lying on the floor. She doesn't recognize him, but it is obvious he is an Oriental. There is no blood anywhere, so she lay back down, trying to remember what had happened the day before, or was it longer than that? She couldn't remember.

She nearly jumps out of her skin when a booming, amplified voice from outside said, "Come out now, Mary. Give yourself up and no one will get hurt.”

It surprised her that they seemed to know her name, even though she didn't. All the loud noise wasn't helping to ease up her headache, either. Mary slid to the foot of the bed and walked to the window. Easing back the curtain, so she could look out, the scene took her by surprise. There were four patrol cars, 10 or 12 policemen with guns drawn, and an ambulance with three EMT's nearby. How had they known anything was wrong when she couldn't remember what had happened.

Mary looked around for her clothes, but there weren't any anyplace. All she had on was her underclothes and she surely wasn't going to walk outside like that. She again heard the booming voice telling her to come or else they were coming in. Mary pulled the sheet from the bed, wrapped it around herself, and took the towel from the rack. Opening the door a few inches, she stuck her hand out with the towel in it, then opening the door wide, Mary walked outside.

Two policemen grabbed her and were about to tear away the sheet when Mary cried, "Please don't, I have no clothes on."

Other police entered the room and one called out to the EMT's to enter. Soon they were pushing out the body on a gurney and put it in the back of the ambulance.

Everyone seemed to be talking at once and Mary's head felt like it would burst. One hand flew to her head, as tears ran down her cheeks. A policewoman quieted everyone down and asked Mary what had happened. A tearful reply of, "I don't know," was all she could say.

The policemen that had gone inside, stepped outside and one said, "It's all clean in there. Let's take her downtown."

The policewoman sat in the backseat with Mary and tried to calm her down. Mary kept repeating, "I don't know what happened or how I got there, or even where am. I didn't even know my name until you called out to me. Oh, my head hurts so much."

When they arrived at the hospital, Mary was taken to a room and the doctor and nurse appeared. From head to toe, she was prodded and poked. It seemed like the testing would never stop. Then they took vial after vial of blood until it seemed like she wouldn't have any left. Finally the doctor said they were through and would let her rest.

She slept fitfully, remembering odd things that didn't seem to go together. She was lying on a cold table with a sheet covering her. The whole room was white and sterile looking. There were voices coming from somewhere, but she saw no one. Suddenly she felt a needle prick the back of one of her legs. Then she was sleeping again. Another scene was a fully garbed person, looking at her leg. Someone was forcing her to drink a foul- tasting liquid. More talking, which she couldn't understand, and then she blacked out. Then the scene in the motel room unfolded and she screamed, unable to hold it back. The doctor and nurse quickly returned and tried to calm her down. Mary cried, "Please, where am 1?"

The doctor said they were in Grand Forks, North Dakota and Mary heaved a sigh of relief, as this is where she did live. The police sergeant and the policewoman entered with notepads and wanted to know what Mary could remember. She told them the bits and pieces of the dreams she had just had. They knowingly shook their heads and said, "We understand.” How could they understand, Mary wondered, when she couldn't?

The doctor and nurse returned with a tray of instruments and asked Mary to turn on her side. She felt a needle prick in the back of her leg and soon the doctor said, "Yep, here it is."

The nurse bandaged her leg as the doctor showed Mary and the policemen a small round disc. "This is the third one this month," the doctor said.

Mary was afraid to ask, but she had to know, "What is it?" The doctor explained, "It is a receiver that was implanted in your leg so you would do anything you were told to. Then someone would call the police and turn you in for being in the room with a dead person."

Mary cried, "Oh, that poor man in the room. Did I HI him?" The policewoman answered, "No, Mary, you didn't. You were only following orders, like the other four women were. All five of you were at the same motel and in the same room, which we thought strange. But we had to act like we didn't suspect anything."

The policewoman went on, "After the fourth one, we've been watching them and when we seen you, Lin Ling, and another man go in, we knew something was up. The other man was the owner of the motel and he came out of the room carrying your clothes and purse, so we suspected we were to late to save Mr. Ling. But you are the last woman they'll use for their devilish dealings. The sergeant obtained a search warrant and we found the operating room behind a secret panel. It is being dismantled and all those involved have been jailed.

Mary was crying, because Mr. Ling had died for no apparent reason. But the policewoman explained that he and the others that had been killed, had all been undercover cops, due to be witnesses in a drug deal that had been raided two months ago and ready to go to trial in a couple of months.

"It really was a shame we didn't protect our men better, although they knew it was a dangerous assignment. We have learned from the mistakes we made this time and hope it doesn't happen again. Those five died from poisoned drinks and are really heroes. The department is very proud of them. We are glad it is over."

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