A punk extortionist terrorizes a small business
owner.
Approx 1,438 words
The Survivors, Chapter 6
©2004 by W. E. Lopez
Don was awakened by the familiar plinka-plinka-dribble of the coffee pot and the heavenly scent of
freshly brewed coffee. He propped
himself up on one elbow and tried to place his surroundings, in the motor home,
of course. Last night, following the
assault by the two convicts while he changed the tire, Maggie had blown one
away using the shotgun and they had fled down the road before stopping for the
night.
He appeared to be alone, where were Maggie and the
kids? Then he heard the sound of
children playing outside and felt Maggie’s tread upon the door step. The door opened with a clatter.
“Oh, you’re up,” Maggie said. “I hope we didn’t wake you. I’ve kept
“Am I ever?” Don said. “Usually I’m not such a sound sleeper. How did you get the kids dressed and outside
without waking me?”
“You must have been exhausted after changing that
tire last night, Don. I just made
shushing motions at the kids and they were very good. They’re discovering ants and beetles and
desert plants just outside. They seem so
happy, considering what’s happened.” She
poured a steaming mug for him and set it into his outstretched hands. Don took a generous swallow before replying.
“The recuperative powers of the young are endless,
Maggie, or they can’t comprehend the enormity of our calamity. One moment they fall on their butt and they
are all yowls and tears; the next they are full of boisterous energy, laughs
and giggles. Unlike adults, children are
not given much to introspection.”
“Yes, thank goodness,” she said. “Say, we couldn’t see it in the dark last
night, but there seems to be a house about half a mile from here. I wanted to walk over and investigate, but I
was afraid it would be too far for the children.”
“You’re beginning to think like a mother already,
Maggie. It becomes you.”
“I’ve had lots of practice taking care of a husband,
Don. Perhaps you men don’t realize
husbands have many of the same needs as children. Someone to cook for them and pick up after
them, give them love and understanding when they have an emotional hurt, or
apply a band-aid and a kiss if they bang their knee. It’s pretty much the same.”
“Well, given my own natural male superiority, I guess
I’ve never looked at it that way.” He
grinned at her with a lop-sided smile.
Maggie replied by tossing a pillow from the kids bed at him and he
spilled half his coffee.
“I surrender, Maggie!
Don’t spank me!” He
chuckled. Maggie picked up his shoes
where they lay by the driver’s seat and handed them to him.
“When you’re dressed, I’ll fix breakfast and then we
can go check out that house. I can’t
tell you how anxious I am.”
“I wouldn’t be anxious at all! If anyone is left alive, we’re likely to get
shot at, wouldn’t you think?”
“Oh, fiddle, Don!
If you’re chicken, you and the kids can wait in the motor home and I’ll
go ring the bell or knock on the door, or whatever.”
“Not on your life, kiddo, if there are any risks to
be taken, I’ll take them.”
“That doesn’t sound like the same man I met
yesterday, Don, the one who wanted to avoid the cities and crowds because of
the possibility of riots or other violence.”
“I didn’t have you and the kids to worry about
yesterday. I’m still not looking forward
to encountering strangers, but we can’t forsake all contact with humanity, or
what’s left of it.”
Maggie opened the fridge trying to decide what to
make for breakfast. She had no idea if
“If I’m not being too personal, Don, you seem to be
living pretty much on your own since I met you.
Have you been on the road long?
Don’t you have any family? Are
you very hungry?” she asked, startling Don with the way she jumped from topic
to topic.
“Two will be plenty for me,” he said. “Yes, I used to be married, but perhaps I
wasn’t the best husband in the world.
Alyce and I were married while I was still in the Army, and frequently
moved around the country. Then too, I
spent two years in
“After I got out of the Army, I opened a small copy
shop in
“Call me stubborn, but I don’t like to be
pushed. I refused to pay and after
several broken windows and a burglary and vandalism, this punk came into my
shop again and pulled a knife on me. He
thought he was a man, but he sure didn’t know how to fight. I parried his knife with one hand and hit him
in the throat with a power-fist. He hit the floor with a crushed larynx
and drowned in his own blood.”
Maggie poured two pancakes into the frying pan,
absent mindedly asking, “Power fist?”
“Oh, sorry, I spent quite a bit of time in a Ranger
Company. Sort of like the Navy Seals,
only our mission was more direct combat than clandestine operations. Hand-to-hand combat was a large part of our
training.
“Most men use their fists to hammer and batter an
oponent into submission. Not only is
that a huge waste of energy, you can seriously injure your hands if you don’t
do it right. A power-fist is a thrusting blow with the hand held flat and
stiffened with the fingers bent at the second joint.” He held out his hand to demonstrate and
smacked the hard edge of his knuckles against his left palm.
“The force of the blow is concentrated into a
knife-like edge, instead of being spread out across six to eight square
inches. The concentrated force is
deadly, and instead of smashing into the jawbone or skull, you aim for flesh or
muscle where the force will do the most damage.
It’s like spiked high-heels on a woman’s shoes, a fashion that required
the airlines to redesign the cabin floors in modern passenger liners.”
“You’re kidding!
Why so?”
“Suppose a woman weighs only 100 pounds. Standing flat-footed on two feet, her weight
might be spread out over twenty to thirty square inches, perhaps only three
pounds per square inch. But that same
100 pounds, concentrated in the space of a spiked heel, only one-quarter by
one-quarter inch, is equal to a force of 1,600 pounds per square inch. That’s the same physics which applies to a power-fist.
“So the punk died, but the district attorney declined
to prosecute. It was obviously
self-defense on my part and not worth the expense of a trial. That was how I learned about the horrors of civil
litigation. The boy’s parents filed a
wrongful death suit, alleging the boys actions were just youthful exuberance
but my actions were that of a trained military killer. I beat the case, but it cost me thousands in
attorney fees, I lost the business, my wife left with my 13 year-old daughter
and I lost the house too. I won the
battle, but I lost the war and my life was all but over.
“Still, I have some small talent as a word-smith and
I found I could write salable articles as a free lance writer. I bought this motor home and took my life on
the road, avoiding most unpleasant confrontations of modern society.”
“I’m sorry, Don, it sounds painful the way you tell
it. I didn’t mean to pry.”
Don changed the subject. “Let me wash up and set up the dinette
table. I’ll call the kids. Boy that smells wonderful, kiddo!”