The Miner
Approx. 3,623 words
©2004 by Geraldine Ahrens
The children were gathered around the table,
listening with excitement and wonder as Sara McCloud’s clear voice spoke the
words from Grimm’s Fairy Tales; her Irish accent making the tale all the more
enchanting.
She enjoyed reading from this book or
Gulliver’s Travels or 1001 Arabian Nights. The stories, written in far off
lands, ignited the children’s imaginations, causing wonderment and curiosity of
the world outside of the small mining camp of Grantsville.
The desire of discovery was palpable;
especially in the older children and her heart went out to them. Life in this
small, remote mining town could seem so stifling.
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A year earlier, Sara McCloud had
been living comfortably in
She had come to this country in search of something
she had not yet found; some challenge that would test her abilities, not only
as a teacher, but as a human. A friend brought to Sara’s attention an ad placed
in the Philadelphia Herald.
Newly constructed school house needs teacher
for approximately 15 children. 28 dollars a month with room
and board. Please respond with credentials to, Roy Travers,
On impulse she wired her credentials to Mr.
Travers. Two weeks later she received a reply, asking her when she could start.
Heath, the man she had been walking out
with, begged her not to leave. He even asked for her hand in marriage, even
though he was totally unprepared to take care of a wife. Sara thanked him for
his consideration but she could not be dissuaded from leaving.
Her friends ferreted out horror stories from
every source they could find, of the mining camps of
Six weeks after her wire from Mr. Travers arrived, she stepped from the stage into the chaotic life of
a booming mining camp.
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She shook her head. It seemed so very long
ago.
Michelle broke her reverie. “Miss McCloud?”
“Yes, Michelle.” She replied.
Michelle, red faced, asked, “Is it true you
and Mr. Travers are getting married?”
“Yes, we are. This coming June, as a matter
of fact.”
Michelle turned to her friend Mabel and
stuck out her tongue. “Told you!”
With a hidden smile, Sara admonished
Michelle. “Ladies do not behave in such a manner. Now run along outside and play before recess
is over.”
She followed the two girls to the door and
stood on the steps, looking toward the mountains; never tiring of the view that
surrounded this small valley. They were remote and strong. A short walk west
and she could look out over the windswept,
Here, in this place, she had discovered her challenge
and had met it face on. She had found herself and finally her home, in Grantsville.
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A commanding voice from the kitchen blared, “Sara
Jean Edwards, get upstairs and clean that room, or you’re not going anywhere
today.”
Instead of doing as she was told, she yelled
toward the kitchen, “You know Mom, Great Aunt Sara
must have really been some kind of woman. She left
Gail Edwards walked up and looked over her
daughter’s shoulder at the journal she was reading. “She was one hell of a
woman. I was only seven when she died. I remember that her eyes were so green
and alive with mischief. Her red hair was long and she kept it tied back with a
green ribbon. I don’t think she even had any gray in it. She used to make up
stories of people in far off lands and creatures that didn’t exist.” Gail
smiled in fond remembrance. “Get your room clean, now. Or you’ll be sitting
here while your friends go skiing.”
Sara giggled and ran upstairs to do as she
had been told.
Gail sighed. Her daughter was almost twenty-two
years old, but acted like a pre-adolescent much of the time. She picked up the worn
journal and thought about Sara McCloud Travers. Yes, she may have young when
she had left home, but probably much older and wiser than her namesake. Oh
well, she thought, so much for progress.
Three months later, Sara and her friends
Joyce and Donna took a trip to
Gail stood on the front porch, waving to the
girls as they left. “Have fun, and
call to let me know how you’re doing.” She shouted, as if they were paying
attention.
The drive to Fallon went quickly. The three
ladies chatting and having a good time, barely noticed
the small town until they reached the south end; F-14 jets could be seen rocketing
into the sky from the Fallon Naval Air Station.
Driving as close to the airfield as they
could, they parked and watched the pilots practice what is called ‘touch and
go’. Just as the wheels were about to touch ground, the jet would soar back
into the air. The three girls decided they would stay in Fallon on their return
trip. At least long enough to find out where the sailors hung out.
They continued on Highway 50, as it unrolled
in a lazy turn across a salt flat. A ‘house of ill repute’ stood defiant
against the backdrop of gray-white powder. An old salt mine, rippled with heat
waves, rose from the flat, looking vacant and forgotten.
A sign proclaiming ‘Highway 50, The
Loneliest Road in
The next stop on their journey was the small
settlement of Gabbs, which looked more like a ghost town than it should have. The
only motel and gas station were closed and many of the shelves in the only
grocery store were barren. Much of the housing was single wide trailers and nearly
all were abandoned and falling into disrepair. It was a depressing place. They drove
down the road another five miles to get gas, at Tommy’s Tavern.
Arriving at the
One other campsite was occupied but the
tenants were shut within their camp trailer and the girls did not see them.
The sun had not yet given its full light and
warmth to the campground, when Sara woke and slipped quietly from the tent. She
walked to the edge of the camp and gazed out over the long valley. In the far
western horizon, she could just make out the
The
While the ichthyosaur fossil was
interesting, Joyce was more interested in the park ranger that managed the
place. His Basque heritage was apparent in his
black hair and green eyes. She flirted unashamedly with him, to the
embarrassment of her two companions.
Donna and Sara left the building to meander
along well marked trails that weaved in and around rocks, trees and fossil
fragments. Signs along the way gave them a history of the ichthyosaur, the area
in which the fossil was found and warned them not to remove anything.
Rounding a bend, they spotted a young man
dressed in black pants and light blue shirt; a sketch pad lay open in his lap
and he was so engrossed in his work he hadn’t heard them approach.
Sara spoke first. “Excuse me. Are we
interrupting?”
Startled, he spoke a few quiet words they
could not hear, and closed his sketch pad.
“Good
morning, ladies.” He stammered. “Uh, name’s
Sara smiled and shook his hand. “I’m Sara
and this is Donna. Pleased to meet you. Do you work here?”
“Here at the park? No miss, I work in the
mine over yonder. I was just doing some sketching of the surrounding hills. I
like to draw the mountains at different times of the day.”
Sara was becoming uncomfortable under his
stare, when Donna asked to see his sketches. He refocused his attention and
opened the sketch pad. Drawing only with a pencil, he managed to bring shadow
and light together, unveiling the life in the mountains and valleys.
“This is beautiful!” Donna exclaimed. “Sara,
look at this. He’s very good.”
“Thank you, miss.” He said.
“I didn’t know there was a working mine in
the area.” Sara said. “The park ranger, Frank, said there was
“No, miss. Grantsville is not totally
abandoned. It’s easy to get there. Just follow the road around the edge of the
hill and it will take you right to the main street.”
“Okay. We’ll maybe see you over there. We’d
better get back for now.”
Donna handed
“Thank you, miss.” He touched his hat and
walked up the trail.
“Sara, he’s cute. And he couldn’t keep his
eyes off of you! Are we going to go over to Grantsville?”
Sara smiled. “Sure, why not?”
Joyce was impatiently waiting outside the
building when the Sara and Donna arrived. “I thought you’d never get back!” She
exclaimed. “I’ve got a date
with Frank tonight. He’ll be here any time now and I didn’t want to just leave
a note on the window of the car.”
“You just met him!” Sara exclaimed. “What if
he’s a nutcase of some sort?”
Joyce retorted. “The national park system
wouldn’t hire a nutcase. He’s a nice guy.”
Donna giggled. “Speaking of just meeting someone,
there was this guy on the trail, he was drawing pictures and he couldn’t take
his eyes off of Sara.”
“Grantsville’s a ghost town, isn’t it?”
Joyce asked.
“I don’t know. This guy says he works at a
mine over there.” Sara said. “We’re going to find out for sure. Right now I
just want something to eat.”
Frank drove up about that time. Sara eyed
him, warily. She thought he was too good looking, probably a shallow
ass. Oh well. She wasn’t the one going on a date with him.
“Where are you going?” she asked.
He glanced over at her. “There’s a place
just down the road from Gabbs, called Tommy’s Tavern. The food is pretty decent
and he has a couple of pool tables. We won’t be real late.”
Donna laughed at his uncomfortable look.
“Don’t worry, Frank. We won’t come hunting you with shotguns or anything. Will
we, Sara?”
Instead of answering, Sara asked him if
there was a working mine in Grantsville.
“I don’t think so. There was one in Ione a
few years ago, but the man who ran the place closed the doors. I haven’t heard
of anything else in the immediate area. Why do you ask?”
Donna piped in. “We met a guy on the trail
today that said he was working at a mine in Grantsville. I think he liked
Sara.”
Sara just gave her a dirty look. “Is anyone
living in Grantsville that you know of?” She asked him.
“Could be. These miners come and go with the seasons.
It’s possible someone is working the tailings.”
At the girl’s blank stare, he explained.
“The tailings are what’s left over after the ore has
been processed. Nowadays, with new methods of extracting gold and silver, the
tailings can be reworked. Some people have done pretty well.”
“That must be what he’s doing then.” Sara
said. “Let’s go eat, I’m hungry. See you later.”
Donna built a fire in the outdoor grill at
the campground. The small camp trailer was gone, leaving the two girls alone.
It was quiet and the stars started winking on, one at a time. The smell of roasting
hotdogs on the grill made Sara’s mouth water.
Later, when the sky was full dark, Donna got
out her star map and binoculars. The two wiled away the hours, finding
constellations and star clusters.
Frank and Joyce came in around midnight and
the four sat around the small campfire, roasting marshmallows and telling ghost
stories that have been around as long as there have been kids and campfires.
The next morning, Sara and Donna drove over
to Grantsville in search of
“This is weird.” Donna whispered. “The mine
must be somewhere else. He just used Grantsville as a known location. Let’s
take a ride up the road.”
Just as the road curled around the corner of
a hill, a tunnel opened up and they could see a man standing at the mouth of it.
Donna stopped to ask him about
“Now what?” she asked.
“Let’s go. This was a dumb idea in the first
place.” Sara said.
As they turned to leave,
Smiling, he waved and touched the corner of
his hat. “Hello! I was hoping to see you again.”
Sara smiled back. He may have not been the
handsomest man she had met, but there was definitely something about him that
made her want to know him better.
He invited them in to his cabin. It was a
one room affair and very old, but it met his needs. Several drawing pads lay
neatly stacked on a corner table and Donna asked if she could look at them.
“Go ahead, Miss. It’s nice to have someone
look at my art and appreciate it. Would either of you like water or coffee? I’m
afraid it is all I have.”
“Do
you have anything cold?” Sara asked.
“Afraid not, miss. I don’t have
electricity.”
“Water would be fine, then. And please call
me Sara, okay?” She smiled.
Donna was engrossed with
“It’s pretty up here; and so quiet. How long
have you been here?”
He chuckled. “It seems like I’ve been here
for an eternity. But I’m not that old, yet.”
Sara was quiet. She was watching this young
man, and beginning to realize that she really liked him. All through high
school and into college she had dated but had never really became interested
enough in the men she dated to go out more than just a time or two.
“Where do you live, Sara?”
“Oh, I live in
Then she laughed. “I shouldn’t dump on you
that way. I hardly even know you!”
“Not to worry, Miss…uh…Sara. I know about
being in limbo. I keep thinking one of these days I’ll be an artist and people
will buy my drawings. That way I could live in
She
looped her arm through his and said, “Let’s take a walk. I want to see more of
this place.”
They walked around the ruins of the old
town.
Sara had lost track of time. She started
feeling misplaced and out of step. “I guess we had better get back. Donna’s
probably wondering where we went to. And you have to get back to work.”
Sara was about ready to be kissed when he
turned away, mumbling something about getting back. Puzzled by his behavior,
she kept quiet while they walked back to the cabin.
Donna was sitting on the steps of the porch
when they returned. “Glad you decided to come back.” She said sarcastically.
But in another tone, “It’s so peaceful up here. The noise and rush of the city
just seems so faraway, it’s almost like living in another world.”
He looked out over the small valley.
“Sometimes it’s too quiet.”
Shaking himself loose from a place faraway,
he reached out and took Sara’s hand. “Thank you for coming, both of you. It’s
been a pleasure, but I should be getting back to work. I hope I see you again,
soon.” And with that he walked quickly away toward the mine tunnel.
Sara watched until the darkness of the tunnel
swallowed him. “Let’s go.”
Winter set in and Sara went back to school.
She seemed focused and determined. She graduated the next spring with a respectable
3.9 grade average.
The snow had vanished into streams and
rivers when the three young women decided to take another trip. This time they
stopped over in Fallon long enough to find out where the sailors hung out. But
Sara couldn’t keep her mind off
The three of them drove to the
The next day they took a drive to
Grantsville. The road looked abandoned and in a sad state of disrepair. As they
drove out of the canyon and in to the clearing, Sara could see the cabin where
The cabin’s roof had been gone for many a
winter and summer. The windows were shattered fragments and much of the walls
were missing.
Donna stood beside Sara. “What in the hell
is going on?” She whispered.
They wandered around the ruins looking for
any trace or hint that someone had lived there in the past year. There were
none.
As they were leaving, Sara spotted a group
of men heading in to the mine tunnel,
Shouting his name she hurried in his
direction; Donna close on her heels. They were brought up short by a broken
down door with ‘NO TRESPASSING’ written in bold red letters.
Retrieving a flashlight form the car they squirmed
over and around the broken door; ignoring the ‘no trespassing’ notice.
Like old sentinels, large timbers held the
bulk of the mountain in check. But small piles of sand and rocks scattered over
the tunnel floor had made the footing precarious.
Donna whispered, “I know I saw them come in
here.”
Sara only nodded her head in reply.
When the tunnel made a sharp turn and they
could no longer see the opening, they decided to turn back. As Sara turned, the
flashlight caught the darker shadow of an old wooden box. Apprehensive, she
picked it up; she suddenly knew what it was.
Out in the sunlight once again, she gently set
the box down. It had been carefully made and ornately carved; the initials R.T.
engraved in the lid. Sara held her breath as she unlatched the lid and opened
the box.
Inside were four, sealed metal cylinders. Wax
had been poured inside each lid to keep out moisture. After carefully removing
the wax from one of them, Sara withdrew several sheets of tightly rolled, heavy
paper. With trembling hands she unrolled the paper.
Beautiful pencil drawings burst out at her; drawings
of the mountains and valley’s surrounding Grantsville; each having the initials
R.T. inscribed on the bottom right corner. Further inspection into the other
cylinders brought forth more drawings, each as grand and detailed as the one
before.
Tears were forming in Sara’s eyes as she awakened
to the fact of what she was seeing. R.T. stood for Roy Travers, the man whom
her Great Aunt Sara had married. However, the last two drawings sent her into a
dizzying spin. One was of her great aunt, obviously when she was very young,
dressed in the fashion of the time.
But, as she looked at the second drawing, she saw herself, also dressed in the fashion of her time, as seen through the artist's eyes the previous year.